The continuing adventures of the Eternal Warrior
I'm really enjoying all the pages. You give the illusion of effortless grace, which might fool some folks who don't compose comics pages for a living.You do need some stars on this page scattered closer to the edges of the white spaces. It looks like there's black tape around the white space. Otherwise, completely admirable.
I see what you mean - though that was intentional as I was thinking about a possible future colour comic and I thought the lower section could be fading out.
Not that there is any plan for a printed comic, colour or black and white at the moment - but I like to think ahead!